This can go down as a valiant failure. The composition feels a little lopsided, the text isn’t spaced tremendously well, and it was originally intended to be a single color piece (the pink was added after as some areas were becoming a little hard to read).

It’s not quite what i envisioned as i was working on it, but i saw it through to completion as an experiment in a few different techniques. I think i can take elements from it and create something that works a little better.

Your thoughts as ever are appreciated.